One day I woke up and it was time to go hunting so we went hunting. It was a long trip so we played games when Dad was driving the car. When we got there we unpacked the car and set up camp. Then we went hunting we got nothing so the next day we took the motorbikes. It was fun and we got 1 pig and a half.Then the next day we went home. Mum calls it tramping for nothing but this time we got some thing.
by Xay
This is a great story Xay, you have edited it really well, checking spelling and adding all the full stops. You are making great progress with your writing. Glad you got something on your hunting trip, sounds like a fun weekend.
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